John and Craig go back to the beginning to examine the mechanics of the flash-forward opening — or as it's known on this podcast, the "Stuart Special." They look at what makes a strong flash-forward, when to avoid them, and how to pay back the narrative debt they incur.

We also follow up on the Scriptnotes survey and answer a massive grab-bag blitz of listener questions including the potential pitfalls of child protagonists, "unfilmable" elements, and how to end a scene.

In our bonus segment for premium members, how do you socialize at Hollywood parties? We've made all the mistakes so you don't have to.

Links:

• The script for episode one of Chernobyl
• Scriptnotes episode 493: Opening Scenes
• Greta Gerwig's Little Women screenplay
• The Sheep Detectives
• Scriptnotes episode 731: Avoidance and Other Anti-Quests
• Sorkinisms – A Supercut by Kevin T. Porter
• My journey to the microwave alternate timeline by Malmesbury
• Solasta 2
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• John August on Bluesky and Instagram
• Outro by Nick Moore (send us yours!)
• Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

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John and Craig welcome back Katie Dippold (Widow's Bay, Ghostbusters) to ask, what advice would you give to your younger self? They revisit the writers they used to be, offer specific guidance to each one, and demystify everything from "Why isn't a producer calling me back?" to "Should I join that sorority?"

Most importantly, we look at how Katie turned her former writing sample into the hilarious and spooky new show, Widow's Bay. We also answer listener questions on calling out stolen ideas and how to pitch yourself when your past work doesn't line up with your voice.

In our bonus segment for premium members, with the rise of AI, will there still be be movies and TV shows in ten or twenty years? Our best guesses lie just behind the paywall.

Links:

• Widow's Bay on AppleTV
• Katie Dippold on Instagram and IMDb
• Scriptnotes listener survey
• Katie as the Babadook
• The last time Katie was on Scriptnotes, Episode 272
• The Sheep Detectives
• Wolf's Belly Publisher's Weekly starred review (preorder the book here!)
• Oscar Rule Changes by Clayton Davis for Variety
• Weekend Read 2
• Watch Haley Z. Boston read her script for Something Very Bad is Going to Happen
• Captain Disillusion
• Homemade Heating Pad
• This Treatment Could Reverse Osteoarthritis Joint Damage With a Single Injection by Javier Carbajal for Wired
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• John August on Bluesky and Instagram
• Outro by Eric Pearson (send us yours!)
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John welcomes five-time Emmy-winning writer Ali Barthwell (Last Week Tonight) to ask, can writers learn to be funny? Drawing from her time as a teacher at The Second City, they look at what writers can learn from sketch and improv, and how to reliably find ways to make an audience laugh.

We also celebrate the WGA membership's ratification of the 2026 MBA, the educational future of the Scriptnotes book, and answer listener questions on the first scene of a comedy and when to stop taking assistant gigs and bet on yourself.

In our bonus segment for premium members, Ali shares how she built a thriving writing career without ever having to live in New York or LA.

Links:

• Ali Barthwell
• Preorder Ali's new book, Reality TV for Snobs
• The Second City
• Pre-inked star stamps
• The Padilla Pause: How the Breakout Star of SNL Nails Comic Timing by Jason Zinoman for NYTimes
• Funnier by Anne Libera
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John welcomes writer/showrunner Haley Z. Boston for a post-mortem on her terrifying new series, Something Very Bad is Going to Happen. They look at how the series evolved from initial idea through production, her experience as a first-time showrunner, the special relationship between women and horror, and how she constructs terror on the page.

We also chart her early career, and answer listener questions on splitting scenes and how to handle an overwhelming amount of development notes.

In our bonus segment for premium members, it's spoiler territory as we look at what we can learn from the clever red herrings and misdirects of the series.

Links:

• Haley Z. Boston on Instagram
• Something Very Bad is Going to Happen on Netflix
• Read along with an excerpt from the pilot
• Saying 'I do' is supposed to be joyous — unless something very bad happens by Gina McIntyre for LA Times
• Men, Women, and Chain Saws: Gender in the Modern Horror Film by Carol J. Clover
• Tasting Day
• Freaks Only
• Atomic Wave Dance by The Comet is Coming
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• Outro by Gloom Canyon (send us yours!)
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John and Craig flip the idea of motivation on its head and ask, what are your characters running from? Using examples across film and TV, they look at the psychological underpinnings of discomfort, and how to use avoidance as a driving force of character and story.

We've also been away for a minute, so there's a lot to catch up on! We follow-up on where the heck we've been, locked pages, a Scottish rap duo, and a new scientific answer for whether one page of script really equals one minute of movie. We also answer listener questions on the afterlife of residuals and writing with a significant other.

In our bonus segment for premium members, we go through their feedback on our first ever video podcast and announce our plans for the future of the show.

Links:

• Does one page of a screenplay really equal one minute of screen time? by Stephen Follows
• California Schemin' trailer
• Indistractable by Nir Eyal
• Explanation of Disbursement of Residual Payments After Death from the WGA West
• Parseword
• Frankenstein's Regrets by Ben Tarnoff for The Nation
• The AI Paradox: How to Make Sense of a Complex Future by Virginia Dignum
• Indigo Girls Tour featuring Jessie Mazin!
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There's a brand new agreement between the WGA and the AMPTP! And since John was the co-chair of the negotiating committee, he's excited to share all the details of the 2026 MBA.

Links:

• The 2026 MBA agreement memorandum
• John August on Instagram and Bluesky
• Scriptnotes on Instagram and TikTok
• Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt

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John and Craig connect the dots on transitions and how they can be just as important as the scenes themselves. They look at how to get your scenes flowing into one another, the many different types of transitions, when to use "CUT TO," and how to use your cuts to tell your story.

We also discuss those shots we no longer need to see in movies, and use a lawsuit filed by two GI Joe writers to examine some common issues created by prewriting.

In our bonus segment for premium members, the Olympics are coming to Los Angeles and we have conflicting feelings!

Links:

• Episode 89 – Transcript
• The 100th episode
• The Inebriati from That Mitchell and Webb Look
• Paramount & MGM Sued By 'G.I. Joe' Writers from Deadline
• Twenty Shots to Be Henceforth Retired from Film Vocabulary on Reverse Shot
• Good Times | Florida Breaks Down
• The Los Angeles Times on Studios donating film set materials to Habitat for Humanity
• Scandal Revealed, Episode 221
• Mistresses on ABC
• We're the Millers on Wikipedia
• LA28 Design Guide
• torched.la
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• This episode was originally produced by Stuart Friedel. Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

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John sits down with the Northwest Screenwriters Guild at an event to promote the Scriptnotes book, and ends up having a poignant conversation about how the career of screenwriting has changed, missteps John made throughout his career, and how his approach to screenwriting has evolved over time.

He also answers questions on kicking bad writing habits, screenwriting careers outside of Hollywood, what to look for in the projects you choose, whether age matters in a screenwriting career, writing your calling card movie, the sidekick problem, and the real story behind the Prince of Persia movie.

In our bonus segment for premium members, John has been hanging out with sketch writers for the last few weeks and is excited to share what he's learned about writing sketch comedy.

Links:

• Northwest Screenwriters Guild
• Steven Soderbergh's Sex Lies and Videotape book
• Our episode with KPop Demon Hunters writers Danya Jimenez & Hannah McMechan
• Notes on Notes
• John's screenplay library
• Dennis Palumbo episodes, 99 – Psychotherapy for screenwriters and 676 – Writing while the World is on Fire
• LA Material
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• Outro by Nick Moore (send us yours!)
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